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Friday, December 16, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday "The spectators"



It is Flash Fiction Friday. A picture can mean many things to many people. Every Friday a group of people share their individual thoughts on a picture. It must be written in 100 words, no more no less.



Jacob couldn’t believe the sight before him.  Poor Carla sat trapped again in a freezing spell the Troll had woven.  Jacob felt her pain grip his heart.   Turning away from the scene he noticed Josh leaning against the wall, stroking his stomach watching the macabre scene before them as if he enjoyed the situation.

“What is wrong with you man? How can you watch that?” Jacob whispered to Josh in shock.

“Why shouldn’t I? Christ man, look at her?  She is exquisite and ours to gaze upon and maybe play with too.” Josh smiled.

“Josh, you are a sick Fucker”

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Check out my fellow FFF writers and enjoy their take of the picture at Flash Fiction Friday.

  Thank you to my friends Benjamin, Katie ,Monique and the ladies of The Demon Slayers for all your help and support.

20 comments:

Jade said...

that one was unexpected!! great post:

Kellie Kamryn said...

powerful!

yvonnenicolas said...

Yeah, that is pretty sick, and disturbingly hot at the same time. I can image him fondling her in her frozen state. Very nice post.

Bonni S. said...

How sad. Her living through pain and anguish. I would hope the troll would get his in the end. Frozen in a state of fear from retribution. Great post.

Sancre Darling aka S.E. Darling said...

Very powerful! Even as I felt my eyes turn away, like your character, I was fascinated. I want to know what they saw. Fabulous job Michelle!

Eden Connor said...

A most unique interpretation! Nice job, Michelle ;-)

michellelady said...

I guess I should have mentioned that you should check out my last week's FFF. It is the beginning or part of Carla's story. ooops.

Patricia Logan said...

Very cool Michelle. Unique and unexpected. Well done!

For Your Eyes Only~Author Lani Rhea said...

Ooh, he is kind of messed up, huh? Great FFF! Loved it!

Sara York said...

Great FFF. Loved it.

Sara York said...

Great FFF. Loved it.

Benjamin Tiberius Russell said...

Very interesting said the Mr. Spock, very interesting indeed.

BLMorticia said...

oh powerful stuff and Im distracted by the pics on your blog. Very nice!

Luna Ella Aldora said...

Bastards. So that answers my question about your troll! I hope Karma kicks that trolls ass right into a black widow's web and she enjoys that snack...or better yet...maybe Ben's "SHE" can do something evil to him. Poor Carla. :( Maybe Jacob is biding his time...

Rolling Muse In The Roses said...

Mmmm wow! Love the twists. Def got me curious. ;-)

Havan said...

I have to repeat Kellie...very powerful!

Naomi said...

Oh, you got me there! That was a real twist. Well done

ERP said...

Interesting twist Michelle! sick fuck indeed

Author Cyril J. Michael said...

Wow girl, that is some imagination you got. Fabulous FFF!

VenusBookluvr said...

I love the direction you took. Fantastic job, so much emotion!

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